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Today, the final stop on the Bumpy Landings blog tour is by Iwa at A Wise Man Once Said…

I can’t believe the tour is over. What a ride! It’s been great to read everyone’s thoughts about my book and learn the different ways the characters and situations resonated with them. Thank you so much to everyone who took part in this fun adventure, both as bloggers and blog readers.

And don’t forget, the Bumpy Landings Blog Tour Contest ends today! Go and leave comments on this past week’s tour stops for your chance to enter. I’ll be awarding three prizes tomorrow: This week’s tour prize; the book trailer prize, and the tour Grand Prize!

Another contest ending today is Tristi’s Book Trailer contest, where the Bumpy Landings trailer is a finalist. Go watch the entries and cast your vote.

I really feel Bumpy Landings is off to a tremendously successful start, and I owe a lot of that success to my blog readers and to the bloggers on my tour.

Mahalo nui loa, and Aloha!

17-Jan Braden Bell
18-Jan LDSWomen’s Book Review
19-Jan Michael Knudsen
20-Jan Krista Jensen
21-Jan Fire and Ice
24-Jan Tamara Heiner
25-Jan Keith Fisher
26-Jan Queen of the Clan
27-Jan Stephanie Humphreys
28-Jan So Many Books, So Little Time
1-Feb Cranberryfries
3-Feb Write Stuff
4-Feb Gamila’s Review
7-Feb Rambles and Ruminations
8-Feb Pink Ink
10-Feb Queen of Chaos
11-Feb I am a Pistachio
16-Feb Temporary? Insanity
17-Feb Why Not? Because I Said So!
18-Feb Elizabeth Mueller
21-Feb Cranberry Corner
22-Feb Tristi Pinkston
24-Feb M. E. Cunningham
25-Feb One Cluttered Brain
28-Feb A Wise Man Once Said…

Today’s post on the blog tour is M. E. Cunningham’s A Writer’s Reality.

I have to tell you, I have been feeling the love lately. Thank so much to everyone who has commented about Bumpy Landings on Facebook, shared a review on Goodreads, and left comments along the way for the blog tour. In addition to all of the great posts written for the blog tour, I thought I would take just a minute to shamelessly share some of the great comments I’ve received directly from readers.

It has been more that a half a century since my first love, and I found myself in the same situation as Jordan, but your novel reawakened those memories in me so explicitly that it was almost as though I was experiencing them again.  I felt like a sixteen-year-old again, trying to fathom the depths of this strange thing that I had encountered, but not knowing how to do that.
But once I cracked that book, I couldn’t put it down.  In one sitting I read it from beginning to end, and enjoyed it all.  There was not a dead spot in the entire thing, and every paragraph just made me want to go on to the next one.
I couldn’t put it down once I started it! Looking forward to your next adventure…
You are the Jack Weyland of Hawaii!! Once i started i couldn’t put it down!

I’m sure the day is coming when someone will hate my book, but for now I’m certainly feeling the love!

17-Jan Braden Bell
18-Jan LDSWomen’s Book Review
19-Jan Michael Knudsen
20-Jan Krista Jensen
21-Jan Fire and Ice
24-Jan Tamara Heiner
25-Jan Keith Fisher
26-Jan Queen of the Clan
27-Jan Stephanie Humphreys
28-Jan So Many Books, So Little Time
1-Feb Cranberryfries
3-Feb Write Stuff
4-Feb Gamila’s Review
7-Feb Rambles and Ruminations
8-Feb Pink Ink
10-Feb Queen of Chaos
11-Feb I am a Pistachio
16-Feb Temporary? Insanity
17-Feb Why Not? Because I Said So!
18-Feb Elizabeth Mueller
21-Feb Cranberry Corner
22-Feb Tristi Pinkston
24-Feb M. E. Cunningham
25-Feb One Cluttered Brain
28-Feb A Wise Man Once Said…

Today’s blog tour stop is over with Elizabeth Mueller Remember to leave your comments to enter the blog tour contest.

Yesterday I had a couple of presentations at my old high school alma matter in Kahuku. It was great to go back and see what’s the same, and what’s different. I got to take pictures with a couple of teachers and coaches, and I think the presentations went well.

Today is the big book signing at the BYU-Hawaii book store. I’m excited to see how things go. I bought a tuberose lei to wear during the signing. I wanted to get one for the book launch last month, but $60 with shipping was a little much. $7.99 at Foodland is a little easier to bear.

17-Jan Braden Bell
18-Jan LDSWomen’s Book Review
19-Jan Michael Knudsen
20-Jan Krista Jensen
21-Jan Fire and Ice
24-Jan Tamara Heiner
25-Jan Keith Fisher
26-Jan Queen of the Clan
27-Jan Stephanie Humphreys
28-Jan So Many Books, So Little Time
1-Feb Cranberryfries
3-Feb Write Stuff
4-Feb Gamila’s Review
7-Feb Rambles and Ruminations
8-Feb Pink Ink
10-Feb Queen of Chaos
11-Feb I am a Pistachio
16-Feb Temporary? Insanity
17-Feb Why Not? Because I Said So!
18-Feb Elizabeth Mueller
21-Feb Cranberry Corner
22-Feb Tristi Pinkston
23-Feb A Wise Man Once Said…
24-Feb M. E. Cunningham
25-Feb One Cluttered Brain

Today’s Bumpy Landings blog tour stop is over at Temporary? Insanity.

It’s here! My long-awaited trip home to Hawaii. I meant to post yesterday while waiting in the airport, but I never managed to have any waiting time, which is either excellent or poor planning on my part, depending on your perspective.

My trip went very well, although my goal of sleeping as much as possible failed miserable, and I’m not sure I can give the 6 month old twins sitting next to me that much blame. I guess I was just too excited for this trip.

Today I will be running around, firming up appointments for the rest of the week and giving my very first author presentation to the Creative Writing class at BYU-Hawaii. Fellow Cedar Fort author Susan Corpany has joined me from Hilo, and I hear she’s quite the entertaining presenter, so hopefully I’ll pick up some good pointers.

I bought a new card for my camera, and have a goal of filling it up during the week. So you can expect to be bombarded with photos as the trip progresses.

17-Jan Braden Bell
18-Jan LDSWomen’s Book Review
19-Jan Michael Knudsen
20-Jan Krista Jensen
21-Jan Fire and Ice
24-Jan Tamara Heiner
25-Jan Keith Fisher
26-Jan Queen of the Clan
27-Jan Stephanie Humphreys
28-Jan So Many Books, So Little Time
1-Feb Cranberryfries
3-Feb Write Stuff
4-Feb Gamila’s Review
7-Feb Rambles and Ruminations
8-Feb Pink Ink
10-Feb Queen of Chaos
11-Feb I am a Pistachio
16-Feb Temporary? Insanity
17-Feb Why Not? Because I Said So!
18-Feb Elizabeth Mueller
21-Feb Cranberry Corner
22-Feb Tristi Pinkston
23-Feb A Wise Man Once Said…
24-Feb M. E. Cunningham
25-Feb One Cluttered Brain

Congratulations to Rebecca Bailey for her winning comment over at the Queen of Chaos.

Today, in honor of Valentine’s Day, there is not a stop on the Bumpy Landings blog tour. Instead, I’m taking part in the Romance Blogfest hosted by Jordan McCollum.

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The theme of this blogfest is Love at first sight…or not! I’ve decided to share the opening scene from Bumpy Landings. Take a few  minutes to read it, if you haven’t already, and then go check out the other posts in blogfest for your Valentine’s Day dose of romance!

Jordan MacDonald eased the rusty old van into a too-small parking space and quickly killed the engine. He glanced at his watch and groaned—the perfect chance to make a good impression, and he was late.
Squeezing himself out of the van, he inched past the faded flowers painted on its side and began running through the parking garage.

As he reached the road in front of Honolulu International Airport, he heard a small plane fly overhead. Instinctively he glanced up but found his view of the sky blocked by the interisland terminal building.

Shaking his head, Jordan darted across the road and through the doors.

The baggage claim area bustled with people greeting one another and hurrying toward the exit, most of them locals with dark skin and hair. During the two years he’d spent in Oregon, Jordan had forgotten what it was like to be in the minority. Now that he was home, however, his fair skin and light blonde hair set him apart from many of the people around him.

Pulling a scrap of paper from his pocket, Jordan set off to find his passenger. Normally, his trip to the airport as the driver for Pua’s Tuberose flower shop would only involve picking up boxes of roses and strange alien-looking protea shipped in from Maui. But today he was doing a favor for his Hawaiian coworker, Malia, by picking up her Auntie Kehau.

Jordan had known Malia before his mission, although at the time she had been just one of his sister’s stupid little friends. She had grown up nicely in the two years he’d been gone, though, and Jordan practically tripped over himself offering to help her out. But now he was late and in danger of messing up the whole excursion.

Taking his paper to one of the arrival monitors, Jordan scanned the list, looking for Hawaiian Air flight 181 from Hilo, so he could see which baggage carousel they had used. Hopefully Auntie Kehau would still be there waiting.

When he found the flight information, Jordan learned the plane had left nearly half an hour late, which meant it wouldn’t arrive for another ten minutes. He exhaled, letting his shoulders relax. This errand for

Malia needed to go well. Jordan had developed a bit of a crush on her, even though she told everyone who would listen that she was waiting for Robert Tu’aia and planned to marry him when his mission ended the next year.

It was probably Malia’s devotion to her missionary that gave Jordan the nerve to talk to her at all. He’d always been quite shy around girls, especially if he had any romantic interest for them.

Jordan had been particularly concerned when his mom got him a job in a flower shop with three attractive coworkers, afraid he’d spend every day as a red-faced, babbling idiot.

But Malia was waiting for Robert. Amber, the tall blonde volleyball star, already had a large male following, and Jordan didn’t even consider her a prospect. And his boss, Lani, was cute—with her short dark hair and thick New Zealand accent—but she had to be pushing forty. So, without any romantic pressure, he found himself able to function quite well and actually enjoyed the job.

After making his way to baggage claim C on the far end of the terminal, Jordan stopped and sat down to wait. The luggage from several other interisland flights crowded the carousel, and dozens of travelers met their loved ones, many receiving flower leis and the traditional kiss on the cheek. Jordan looked at the lei Malia had sent with him for Auntie Kehau. It was a double strand tuberose lei—the namesake of Pua’s

Tuberose flower shop. The long, creamy, trumpetshaped blooms were known more for their scent than their appearance, and Jordan couldn’t help but open the bag to sneak a whiff of their rich, spicy aroma.

The smell brought back a flood of memories: greetings, partings, special events, and a particularly disastrous prom night. That was a long time ago, thought Jordan. You’re a different man now. Although just how different still remained to be seen.

Jordan checked his watch and realized the people from flight 181 would be arriving at any moment. He stood and began looking for his passenger. He didn’t have much to go on—just a name, a flight number, and a vague description: “She’s about my height, with shoulder-length black hair,” Malia had told him before he left. It didn’t take long for Jordan to spot a woman matching this description.

In fact, he quickly saw several dozen women about Malia’s height with shoulder-length black hair.

This was not going to be as easy as he first thought. He looked at the paper and read through the scant information again, hoping to find something that might help his search, but he had nothing. He reached for his cell phone to call Malia but found it missing from his pocket. With a twinge of panic, he realized he’d probably left it plugged in at home, and with no way to call Malia, he’d have to find Auntie Kehau on his own.

Nearby, a group of kids in purple T-shirts clustered around a big man holding a sign that read Pearl City Elementary, and Jordan had a flash of inspiration. Hurrying to a rental car counter, he asked the man behind the desk, “Do you have a piece of paper and a marker I could use?” The man pulled a nearly blank sheet from a stack near his printer and then rummaged around in his desk before handing Jordan a large, red Sharpie.

Jordan thanked the man and then copied the name from Malia’s little scrap, starting out neatly but cramming the last half of “Pulakaumaka” against the right side of the page. He returned the pen and made his way to baggage carousel C, where he stood with his makeshift sign, smiling at every middle-aged, dark-haired woman who passed. He got a lot of smiles in return, but nobody stopped.

As he looked over the crowd, he noticed a girl across the baggage claim eyeing him. She was a local girl about his age, and quite attractive.

He smiled at her nervously, and she smiled back, filling Jordan with a mixture of excitement and panic.

The girl turned her attention to her backpack, from which she produced a cell phone. As Jordan continued his search for Auntie Kehau, he kept stealing glances back at this girl. After a few minutes, she put her phone away and wheeled her suitcase toward him. His heart pounded in his chest as she approached, and he thought to himself, You’re a different man, now. You can do this! Gathering all of his courage, Jordan managed a smile and said, “Hi.”

“Hi, Jordan,” she replied.

Jordan drew in a quick breath. How did she know his name? He searched his memory frantically but couldn’t remember ever meeting this girl before. He looked at her luggage for a clue but without success.

Finally he had to admit defeat. “Um, I’m sorry,” he stammered. “What was your name again?”

The girl raised her eyebrows and then smiled. She took the sign from his hand and held it under her chin so that the top of the paper brushed her black, shoulder length hair.

Jordan had found Auntie Kehau.

The Bumpy Landings blog tour resumes tomorrow!

17-Jan Braden Bell
18-Jan LDSWomen’s Book Review
19-Jan Michael Knudsen
20-Jan Krista Jensen
21-Jan Fire and Ice
24-Jan Tamara Heiner
25-Jan Keith Fisher
26-Jan Queen of the Clan
27-Jan Stephanie Humphreys
28-Jan So Many Books, So Little Time
1-Feb Cranberryfries
3-Feb Write Stuff
4-Feb Gamila’s Review
7-Feb Rambles and Ruminations
8-Feb Pink Ink
10-Feb Queen of Chaos
11-Feb I am a Pistachio
15-Feb Summerill Surf
16-Feb Temporary? Insanity
17-Feb Why Not? Because I Said So!
18-Feb Elizabeth Mueller
21-Feb Cranberry Corner
22-Feb Tristi Pinkston
23-Feb A Wise Man Once Said…
24-Feb M. E. Cunningham
25-Feb One Cluttered Brain


Today’s stop on the Bumpy Landings Blog Tour is Autumn over at Queen of Chaos.

Yesterday’s tour stop has been postponed due to the reviewer’s copy of Bumpy Landings not making it to Hawaii, even after three weeks. (Note to self: Book rate to Hawaii isn’t worth the $2 saved.)

Instead of writing this morning, I worked hard on getting some posters made for a couple of promotional efforts I have planned next week in Hawaii with fellow Cedar Fort author Susan Corpany. I got the posters designed and printed, and was trying to figure out how to pack them for mailing when my dear wife reminded me that the mail would likely not arrive until after I do next Tuesday, and it might be smarter all around to just take the posters with me.

After spending my morning hurrying to get the posters done in time to mail, that was not what I wanted to hear. And yet I have to admit she’s right.

And at least the posters are done.

If any of you are in Laie or Kahuku on Friday, February 18th, come by and say hi during our signing and library presentation.

17-Jan Braden Bell
18-Jan LDSWomen’s Book Review
19-Jan Michael Knudsen
20-Jan Krista Jensen
21-Jan Fire and Ice
24-Jan Tamara Heiner
25-Jan Keith Fisher
26-Jan Queen of the Clan
27-Jan Stephanie Humphreys
28-Jan So Many Books, So Little Time
1-Feb Cranberryfries
3-Feb Write Stuff
4-Feb Gamila’s Review
7-Feb Rambles and Ruminations
8-Feb Pink Ink
10-Feb Queen of Chaos
11-Feb I am a Pistachio
15-Feb Summerill Surf
16-Feb Temporary? Insanity
17-Feb Why Not? Because I Said So!
18-Feb Elizabeth Mueller
21-Feb Cranberry Corner
22-Feb Tristi Pinkston
23-Feb A Wise Man Once Said…
24-Feb M. E. Cunningham
25-Feb One Cluttered Brain

Today’s blog tour stop is over at Pink Ink by Jewel Allen.

A year ago, I happened to be in Utah for work when my friend and fellow author Josi Kilpack had the launch party for her book Devils Food Cake. It was fun to go up to Brigham City and surprise her. Plus, there was cake.

This past week, I happened to be in Utah for work when Josi had the launch party for Blackberry Crumble. What are the odds!

Josi is a very talented writer, an entertaining speaker, and someone I am proud to call a friend.

Once the Bumpy Landings Blog Tour contest is done at the end of February, watch this space for a Blackberry Crumble giveaway!

17-Jan Braden Bell
18-Jan LDSWomen’s Book Review
19-Jan Michael Knudsen
20-Jan Krista Jensen
21-Jan Fire and Ice
24-Jan Tamara Heiner
25-Jan Keith Fisher
26-Jan Queen of the Clan
27-Jan Stephanie Humphreys
28-Jan So Many Books, So Little Time
1-Feb Cranberryfries
3-Feb Write Stuff
4-Feb Gamila’s Review
7-Feb Rambles and Ruminations
8-Feb Pink Ink
9-Feb A Wise Man Once Said…
10-Feb Queen of Chaos
11-Feb I am a Pistachio
15-Feb Summerill Surf
16-Feb Temporary? Insanity
17-Feb Why Not? Because I Said So!
18-Feb Elizabeth Mueller
21-Feb Cranberry Corner
22-Feb Tristi Pinkston
24-Feb M. E. Cunningham
25-Feb One Cluttered Brain

Congratulations to Becca, for her comment on the Bumpy Landings review at Melanie’s Write Stuff blog. She’s the third winner in the Bumpy Landings Blog Tour contest!

For your chance to win this week, remember to leave a comment at this weeks blog tour stops, starting with Rambles and Ruminations today!

An author puts a great deal of themselves into their work (see the post titled How Much of This is You). By default, then, an author also puts a bit of those around them into a story. Character histories, speech patterns, attitudes and interests; they all come from somewhere.

In early drafts of Bumpy Landings, those influences and their sources were fairly obvious, at least to me, and one of the things I worked hard at when preparing the manuscript for submission was to obscure those influences. These are fictional characters, after all, and not intended to represent real people. Yet I have gotten the following three questions repeatedly, and thought I might share the answers here.

  • Is your mother like Jordan’s mom? Absolutely not. In fact, I often asked myself what my mother would do, and then wrote the opposite.
  • Who is Kehau? Several young ladies provided the hope and heartbreak I drew upon in writing Kehau. One did in fact dance at PCC. There is no single point of inspiration, however, and the character herself is very much a work of fiction.
  • Who is Heather? I knew a girl years ago who was a little like Heather. Like Jordan’s mom, however, Heather is an exaggeration, written primarily to give Jordan someone to facilitate the growth he needs.

There is a disclaimer in the front of the book that says all of the characters are fictional, and any similarity to actual persons is coincidental. I tried very hard to make sure that was truly the case in Bumpy Landings.

17-Jan Braden Bell
18-Jan LDSWomen’s Book Review
19-Jan Michael Knudsen
20-Jan Krista Jensen
21-Jan Fire and Ice
24-Jan Tamara Heiner
25-Jan Keith Fisher
26-Jan Queen of the Clan
27-Jan Stephanie Humphreys
28-Jan So Many Books, So Little Time
1-Feb Cranberryfries
3-Feb Write Stuff
4-Feb Gamila’s Review
7-Feb Rambles and Ruminations
8-Feb Pink Ink
9-Feb A Wise Man Once Said…
10-Feb Queen of Chaos
11-Feb I am a Pistachio
15-Feb Summerill Surf
16-Feb Temporary? Insanity
17-Feb Why Not? Because I Said So!
18-Feb Elizabeth Mueller
21-Feb Cranberry Corner
22-Feb Tristi Pinkston
24-Feb M. E. Cunningham
25-Feb One Cluttered Brain

Today’s blog tour stop is with Melanie over at Write Stuff. Melanie was one of my beta readers, and gave me some great–if brutal–recommendations.

When Cedar Fort informed me of the January release date for Bumpy Landings, I had a bit of concern. Too late for the Christmas rush, too early for summer vacation reading, January just seemed like a gray, yucky month for a book to come out.

But then it occurred to me that a fun story set in the tropical warmth of Hawaii was just the thing a gray, yucky January needed, and so my “Escape the Winter Chill” line was born.

La'ie, looking south from Hukilau BeachAnd it appears to be working. Melanie refers to my book as a $15 Hawaiian vacation in her review, and several friends posted to Facebook that they were snuggled under their blankets, reading Bumpy Landings to stay warm.

I think this is entirely appropriate, as the it was a cold, wintry day years ago that I first started writing the story that would become Bumpy Landings.

17-Jan Braden Bell
18-Jan LDSWomen’s Book Review
19-Jan Michael Knudsen
20-Jan Krista Jensen
21-Jan Fire and Ice
24-Jan Tamara Heiner
25-Jan Keith Fisher
26-Jan Queen of the Clan
27-Jan Stephanie Humphreys
28-Jan So Many Books, So Little Time
1-Feb Cranberryfries
3-Feb Write Stuff
4-Feb Gamila’s Review
7-Feb Rambles and Ruminations
8-Feb Pink Ink
9-Feb A Wise Man Once Said…
10-Feb Queen of Chaos
11-Feb I am a Pistachio
15-Feb Summerill Surf
16-Feb Temporary? Insanity
17-Feb Why Not? Because I Said So!
18-Feb Elizabeth Mueller
21-Feb Cranberry Corner
22-Feb Tristi Pinkston
24-Feb M. E. Cunningham
25-Feb One Cluttered Brain

The Bumpy Landings blog tour was scheduled to arrive at the Summerill Surf blog today, but that post has been delayed due to illness. Get well soon, Summerills!

Also behind schedule is the awarding of prizes for the first two Blog Tour Comment contest. This will teach me to end a contest on the same weekend as a business trip. But I have looked through the comments and Random.org has selected winners for the first two weeks:

  • balmador (commenting on LDSWBR review)
  • Maggie (commenting on Queen of the Clan review)

I’ll get that chocolate in the mail as soon as I’m back with it in the same timezone.

Keep those comments going on the tour stops for your chance to win this week’s prize.

And there is another contest, this one for a chance to win a spot at the primo guest table during the LDStorymakers contest. You can find out about the contest here!

I’ll blog some of my thoughts about the LDStorymakers conference a little later.

17-Jan Braden Bell
18-Jan LDSWomen’s Book Review
19-Jan Michael Knudsen
20-Jan Krista Jensen
21-Jan Fire and Ice
24-Jan Tamara Heiner
25-Jan Keith Fisher
26-Jan Queen of the Clan
27-Jan Stephanie Humphreys
28-Jan So Many Books, So Little Time
1-Feb Cranberryfries
3-Feb Write Stuff
4-Feb Gamila’s Review
7-Feb Rambles and Ruminations
8-Feb Pink Ink
9-Feb A Wise Man Once Said…
10-Feb Queen of Chaos
11-Feb I am a Pistachio
15-Feb Summerill Surf
16-Feb Temporary? Insanity
17-Feb Why Not? Because I Said So!
18-Feb Elizabeth Mueller
21-Feb Cranberry Corner
22-Feb Tristi Pinkston
24-Feb M. E. Cunningham
25-Feb One Cluttered Brain