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Today, our blog tour stops at Queen of the Clan Hurry back after you read the review and leave your comments.

Those who have read Bumpy Landings will recognize the gazebo behind the La’ie Temple. A couple of key scenes in the book take place here.

The gazebo played a major role in my own life, too. Waaay back in December of ‘89, I walked my sweetheart up to this very spot, got down on one knee, and found myself struggling to maintain consciousness. After a what seemed like an eternity of nerves so intense I came very close to passing out, I finally managed to ask her to marry me.

To my great relief, she said yes.

Fast forward to April of ‘09. I found myself pacing the halls of the Provo Marriott, waiting to pitch a manuscript called Delivering Tuberose to Kirk Shaw from Covenant. I wasn’t quite nervous enough to faint this time, but I felt darn close.

Julie Write–bless her giant heart–engaged me in small-talk while I waited, assured me that Kirk was a nice, easy-going guy, and shared an inside joke to use as an ice breaker. I managed to calm down, and had a great visit with Kirk (Julie was totally right–as usual). Kirk asked for the full manuscript, and I officially entered the world of manuscript submissions.

And the waiting game began.

The Bumpy Landings Blog Tour:

17-Jan Braden Bell
18-Jan LDSWomen’s Book Review
19-Jan Michael Knudsen
20-Jan Krista Jensen
21-Jan Fire and Ice
24-Jan Tamara Heiner
25-Jan Keith Fisher
26-Jan Queen of the Clan
27-Jan Stephanie Humphreys
28-Jan So Many Books, So Little Time
1-Feb Cranberryfries
2-Feb Summerill Surf
3-Feb Write Stuff
4-Feb Gamila’s Review
7-Feb Rambles and Ruminations
8-Feb Pink Ink
9-Feb A Wise Man Once Said…
10-Feb Queen of Chaos
11-Feb I am a Pistachio
16-Feb Temporary? Insanity
17-Feb Why Not? Because I Said So!
18-Feb Elizabeth Mueller
21-Feb Cranberry Corner
22-Feb Tristi Pinkston
24-Feb M. E. Cunningham
25-Feb One Cluttered Brain

Take a Bow

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Stop by Keith Fisher’s for today’s blog tour stop, and don’t forget the contests!

When I got home from my Book Launch trip, I found that the cast and crew of the book trailers had assembled for one final curtain call.

In case there is anyone who doesn’t already know, I have the greatest 13-year-old on the planet. Don’t doubt–it’s true!

The Bumpy Landings Blog Tour:

17-Jan Braden Bell
18-Jan LDSWomen’s Book Review
19-Jan Michael Knudsen
20-Jan Krista Jensen
21-Jan Fire and Ice
24-Jan Tamara Heiner
25-Jan Keith Fisher
26-Jan Queen of the Clan
27-Jan Stephanie Humphries
28-Jan So Many Books, So Little Time
1-Feb Cranberryfries
2-Feb Summerill Surf
3-Feb Write Stuff
4-Feb Gamila’s Review
7-Feb Rambles and Ruminations
8-Feb Pink Ink
9-Feb A Wise Man Once Said…
10-Feb Queen of Chaos
11-Feb I am a Pistachio
16-Feb Temporary? Insanity
17-Feb Why Not? Because I Said So!
18-Feb Elizabeth Mueller
21-Feb Cranberry Corner
22-Feb Tristi Pinkston
24-Feb M. E. Cunningham
25-Feb One Cluttered Brain

Today’s stop on the blog tour is Tamara Heiner over at Chasing Dreams. But before you go, read about the Blog Tour Contest!

Do you ever have the feeling that life has managed to get ahead of you somehow, and you’re spending all of your time playing catch-up? Well, that’s me right now.

The Bumpy Landings blog tour has been running for a week, and the Book Trailer has been out for even longer, but I’m just now getting the contests up and going. That’s the bad news.

The good news? I’m starting BOTH contests RIGHT NOW. And even BETTER NEWS? I’m giving away a total of EIGHT PRIZES!

That’s right–one prize for the Book Trailer contest, plus one prize each week for the six weeks of the Blog Tour, and a special GRAND PRIZE to be selected from all entries at the end of the blog tour.

What do you win? Chocolate, of course! Unless your name is Jaime Theler, in which case you win a can of macadamia nuts instead. (Actually, any winner can request a can of nuts, if that’s the way you roll.) And the Grand Prize? Even more chocolate, plus a signed copy of Bumpy Landings, and a copy of the CD Vaihitian by the musical group Vaihi–the same group that provided the wonderful music for the Bumpy Landings trailers.

So how do you play? I’ll tell you.

The Bumpy Landings Blog Tour contest is simple. Just leave a comment on any of the blog tour Bumpy Landings reviews, and you will be entered. Comments left by the end of day Saturday will be eligible for that week’s drawing. Since I’m behind the times, I will be holding two drawings this weekend–one for this week’s stops, and one for the tour stops last week.

For this Book Trailer contest, the rules are the same as the last one. You can be entered up to 4 times by doing the following:

  • Post the Bumpy Landings Trailer on your blog – good for 1 entry
  • Link your blog back to this post so your readers can play along – good for another entry
  • Post a link to the video on your Facebook page – also good for an entry
  • Tweet about the contest, with a link back to this post and the #bumpylandings hashtag – your 4th and final entry

The Bumpy Landings Trailer contest runs THIS WEEK ONLY, so get your entries in. Let me know what you’ve done by leaving a comment on this post.

The Bumpy Landings Blog Tour:

17-Jan Braden Bell
18-Jan LDSWomen’s Book Review
19-Jan Michael Knudsen
20-Jan Krista Jensen
21-Jan Fire and Ice
24-Jan Tamara Heiner
25-Jan Keith Fisher
26-Jan Queen of the Clan
27-Jan Stephanie Humphries
28-Jan So Many Books, So Little Time
1-Feb Cranberryfries
2-Feb Summerill Surf
3-Feb Write Stuff
4-Feb Gamila’s Review
7-Feb Rambles and Ruminations
8-Feb Pink Ink
9-Feb A Wise Man Once Said…
10-Feb Queen of Chaos
11-Feb I am a Pistachio
16-Feb Temporary? Insanity
17-Feb Why Not? Because I Said So!
18-Feb Elizabeth Mueller
21-Feb Cranberry Corner
22-Feb Tristi Pinkston
24-Feb M. E. Cunningham
25-Feb One Cluttered Brain

Today’s stop on the blog tour is over at the LDS Women’s Book Review.

I was originally planning to post a little more on my Bumpy Landings writing journey, but then my sister forwarded these pictures to me, and I just had to post them.

In the spirit of “write what you know,” when writing Bumpy Landings I gave my main character Jordan a job in a flower shop.

Before my mission, I was the delivery driver for Flowers by Vola, and I would count that among the best jobs I’ve ever had in my life.

Pretty co-workers (to whom I gave regular back rubs); beautiful-smelling flowers; the chance to drive and get paid for it; receiving sage advice (especially about girls); and the opportunity to spread smiles and happiness. All of these things made this a wonderful job, and I just had to draw upon that experience when writing Bumpy Landings.

The Bumpy Landings Blog Tour:

17-Jan    Braden Bell
18-Jan    LDSWomen’s Book Review
19-Jan    Michael Knudsen
20-Jan    Krista Jensen
21-Jan   Fire and Ice
24-Jan    Tamara Heiner
25-Jan    Keith Fisher
26-Jan    Queen of the Clan
27-Jan    Stephanie Humphries
28-Jan    So Many Books, So Little Time
1-Feb    Cranberryfries
2-Feb    Summerill Surf
3-Feb    Write Stuff
4-Feb    Gamila’s Review
7-Feb   Rambles and Ruminations
8-Feb    Pink Ink
9-Feb    A Wise Man Once Said…
10-Feb   Queen of Chaos
11-Feb    I am a Pistachio
16-Feb    Temporary? Insanity
17-Feb    Why Not? Because I Said So!
21-Feb    Cranberry Corner
22-Feb    Tristi Pinkston
24-Feb M. E. Cunningham
25-Feb    One Cluttered Brain

Jordan’s short blond hair danced in the wind as it blew onto shore, carrying with it the taste of salt and the roar of the sea. Rebecca huddled at his side, holding her own hair tightly. Jordan gently put his arm around her.

“So,” he asked, “what do you think?” They stood together at the eastern tip of Laie Point, a large finger of rock surrounded by the Pacific Ocean. Above them, clouds exploded with the colors of morning, and a bright orange sun inched its way up over the horizon.

“Nice,” she said, staring out across the sea. “Very ro’tic.”

“Ro’tic?” Jordan hadn’t heard that one before.

“Yeah,” Rebecca said. “‘Romantic,’ but without the ‘man’.”

“Without the man?” Jordan asked with mock indignation. “What about me?”

Rebecca smiled and elbowed him playfully. “Sorry,” she said. “Brothers don’t count.”

This scene was among the first that came to me when I began working on Bumpy Landings, and it soon became one of my favorites. Yet several months after I attended the LDStorymakers conference, it was gone, relegated to the “Deleted Scenes” file.

The problem? As fun as this scene was, as nicely as it established setting and character, as emotionally attached as I was to the sunrise at La’ie Point, it wasn’t where the story began. In fact, the story didn’t begin until after page 100 (!), and the first thing I did when editing the first draft was draw a red line through the first third of the book.

I then spent the next month in a condition I call First-Chapter-itis, where I wrote and rewrote, trying to establish a decent hook while starting at the appropriate story-changing scene. It goes something like this:

Jordan MacDonald eased the rusty old van into a too-small parking space and quickly killed the engine. He glanced at his watch and groaned—the perfect chance to make a good impression, and he was late.

Squeezing himself out of the van, he inched past the faded flowers painted on its side and began running through the parking garage. As he reached the road in front of Honolulu International Airport, he heard a small plane fly overhead. Instinctively he glanced up but found his view of the sky blocked by the interisland terminal building. Shaking his head, Jordan darted across the road and through the doors.

The baggage claim area bustled with people greeting one another and hurrying toward the exit, most of them locals with dark skin and hair. During the two years he’d spent in Oregon, Jordan had forgotten what it was like to be in the minority. Now that he was home, however, his fair skin and light blonde hair set him apart from many of the people around him.

Pulling a scrap of paper from his pocket, Jordan set off to find his passenger. Normally, his trip to the airport as the driver for Pua’s Tuberose flower shop would only involve picking up boxes of roses and strange alien-looking protea shipped in from Maui. But today he was doing a favor for his Hawaiian coworker, Malia, by picking up her Auntie Kehau.

Jordan had known Malia before his mission, although at the time she had been just one of his sister’s stupid little friends. She had grown up nicely in the two years he’d been gone, though, and Jordan practically tripped over himself offering to help her out. But now he was late and in danger of messing up the whole excursion.

This weekend I checked two items off of my Bumpy Landings release planning list. Both were fairly important milestones in this whole process.

The first was a Saturday morning visit to a recording studio to lay down the dialog tracks for my up and coming Bumpy Landings book trailers.

My friend Jim has a recording studio in the corner of his barn, and he graciously agreed to lend his equipment, his voice, and the voice of his daughters to my cause. I also got the help of our home teacher’s son David to read the main character’s lines.

I brought along my daughter to run the cameras for a “making of” documentary. Sadly, all she got was two photos. She has since been fired. But we did get the audio, and that’s what counts.

Stay tuned for more updates as I continue work on the video portion.

The other big event is that I traded in a whole heap of SkyMiles for a ticket to Hawaii.  I’ll be traveling the third week of February to promote my book, and I’ve been talking to several people at BYU-Hawaii about bringing some author friends with me and doing a writing workshop for students and possibly even the community. I think this could be a whole lot of fun.

I really wanted to get four tickets, but there just weren’t enough miles in the account to make that happen. Maybe for Bumpy Landings II.


From www.daronfraley.com:

Three tribes are at war on the planet Gan, unaware that the sign of Christ’s birth on an unknown world – Earth – is about to appear in the heavens. During a bloody skirmish with Gideonite troops, Jonathan of Daniel spares Pekah, a young enemy soldier, gaining his trust forever. These two distant brothers from estranged tribes covenant with each other to end the war being waged by a self-proclaimed emperor, and soon discover the intentions of a far more dangerous foe named Rezon – a sinister general bent on ruling those he can bring into subjection and destroying all others. In the end, Pekah’s selfless bravery is the means by which all the tribes are united. But there are dissenters, and Rezon escapes a well-deserved fate. When the promised heavenly signs appear, will there be peace at last, or will the malefactors once again threaten the safety of them all?

I was very excited to read Daron Fraley’s debut novel, The Thorn. The concept that God created countless other worlds in addition to this one, and that the peoples of those worlds would in turn recognize and worship Him, is one that I have often heard before but never seen explored in fiction.

I was a little torn on my expectations of this novel. As a science fiction fan, I enjoy the wonder and excitement that comes from discovering strange new worlds and people. However, the world that Daron created is already very familiar to anyone with a basic understanding of biblical times and peoples. The plants, animals, and even character names have very little new about them.

Yet this lack of novelty, given the story’s basic premise, is not only understandable but almost required. If people on Earth were created in the image of God, and taught by him through prophets, then the people on other worlds created by Him would also likely be in his image and have been tought similar doctrines and principles. The same would hold true to the plants and animals on these other worlds.

Once I reconciled my expectations with the reality of the world of Gan, I quickly got into the story of Johnathan, Eli, and Pekah, which read very much like an historical adventure. In fact, one of the things Daron did extremely well in the book was creating believable stories of faith and miracles that could easily have come from the scriptures.

I enjoyed reading The Thorn, and look forward to getting my hands on the rest of the series.

I’m excited to post my review of The Thorn, the debut novel of author Daron D. Fraley. But before I do, I thought it would be fun to share an interview I recently had with Daron.

When did you realize you wanted to be a writer?

The realization hit me in high school, my creative writing class, I think in the 10th grade. Might be 11th grade. My 25th reunion is this summer, so I will use that as my excuse for why I can’t remember the year.

Your first book, “The Thorn,” was released last month. Tell us a little about it?

Old Testament on another planet…

I love that tagline. :)

Yeah – that is a good one. I’m familiar with the belief that Christ’s atonement is not only for this world, but people living on other worlds as well. How did you decide to use that as the basis for your novel?

The basic idea for the story came from this quote by Neil A. Maxwell: “How many planets are there in the universe with people on them? We don’t know, but we are not alone in the universe! God is not the God of only one planet! I testify that Jesus is truly the Lord of the universe, ‘that by [Christ], and through him, and of him, the worlds are and were created, and the inhabitants thereof are begotten sons and daughters unto God’ D&C 76:24″ — Neal A. Maxwell His testimony made me wonder about what it might be like on another creation. Since I have no spaceship… imagination will have to do for now.

Imagination is a wonderful thing. I’m imagining a slice of chocolate coconut cream pie. Mmmm. Oops, sorry. Ahem.

I also found it interesting that you chose to populate the planet Gan with plants and animals identical to those found on Earth. Why did you decide to go that route, rather than use the alien flora and fauna typically found in SFF?

Excellent question! The answer to this question is given in book two, “Heaven’s Garden”. I can tell you that the choice to make the plants and animals exactly the same was absolutely intentional. I am sorry I can’t elaborate more at the moment. :)

I figured it had to be intentional, and now I’m even more curious to know the story.

Back in March, you were part of a large and, from the looks of it, successful book launch party hosted by your publisher, Valor. Tell us a little about what went into that.

My job was pretty easy. Spread the word by Facebook, Twitter, email. Show up. Smile. Bring a pen (I did help carry in books and setup tables). But Valor Publishing did a fantastic job in arranging for the location, the entertainment (Shaun Borrowes), and everything else behind the scenes. I don’t have permission to give names, but just let it be said that published authors who know what Valor is doing in the regional and national markets are stunned by what they are accomplishing. I look forward to the day when Valor is a household name like Random House, Penguin, Tor, etc.

Valor is a new player in the publishing game, having just released their first book less than a year ago. What has it been like working with them?

So far: Awesome. I wish I could elaborate on this one too, but Valor has been great in taking ideas from all sides (authors, publishers, editors, publicist folks), and turning those ideas into huge contracts which will help to get the Valor name out there. As they make formal announcements about some of these partnerships, I hope to see them carry all of the Valor authors into the national spotlight. Fingers crossed!

In addition to your Launch Party and Blog Tour, what marketing plans do you have for “The Thorn?”

I am currently in the middle of a month long Virtual Book Tour on book reviewer blogs. There will soon be a load of book signings (I can kiss my Saturdays goodbye), and there are media / promotional things happening behind the scenes at Valor right now. I would encourage writers, currently published authors, and readers to all watch the Valor website for news about the big things coming down the pike. Of course anything directly related to “The Thorn” will be advertised and promoted on my own website, http://www.daronfraley.com

Was this your first story, or do you have manuscripts hidden under the bed that you will never let see the light of day?

I have two manuscripts underway, but “The Thorn” is my first. I am currently about 25,000 words into the sequel, “Heaven’s Garden”, and have another work at about the same word count which I hope to finish by year end. Just because my first manuscript is now in print, doesn’t mean I consider myself to be extraordinarily gifted as a writer… Rather, I was just lucky. I was in the right place, at the right time.

What should readers expect to see from you in the future, both near and long-term?

Well, as I said before, the sequel will come out next spring, if I can hit my deadline for completion. My fabulous editor, Darth Editus, will teach me the pain associated with the dark side if I don’t. There will be a third book in the series, “The Chronicles of Gan”. I also hope to get my other manuscript ready. It is also speculative fiction, but in a modern day setting.

It sounds like you will be busy. But that’s a good thing, right?

What advice would you give to other writers and would-be authors?

Never give up! Write what you love. Be who you are. And most importantly: NETWORK. I would not be a published author today had I not gotten to know authors and publishers and agents who had blogs. I read their posts. I learned. I got to know them. I went to the LDStorymakers conference. My success as a first time author, with my FIRST manuscript being picked up by a super cool publisher, happened because I networked with people.

I absolutely agree. I have often said that the best part of being a writer is the cool people it allows me to meet – present company included.

Thanks for including me on your blog tour, and taking the time to answer these questions. Hopefully I’ve given you enough time to answer them!

Don, Thank you so much for hosting this interview on your blog, and for taking the time to read “The Thorn”. I look forward to your review!

Many years ago, my dad had a little book called The Busy Mormon Father’s Notebook, and it had a funny little jokes and thoughts scribbled across the pages.

One “note” said something like this:

Women of the Book Of Mormon:

  • Book Idea
  • Fireside
  • Ensign Article
  • 2 1/2 minute talk

I have to admit that joke is part of the reason I signed up to participate in the blog tour for Heather B. Moore’s Women of the Book of Mormon. I was extremely curious to see just what kind of book she had come up with.

I am very glad I did.

(From DeseretBook.com)An ideal gift to share with mothers, sisters, and friends, this refreshing and engaging book offers new insights into the temporal and spiritual lives of our ancient sisters.

Explore the lives, circumstances, and choices of women in the Book of Mormon in this uplifting and inspirational volume that illustrates the parallels between the lives of the women of the Book of Mormon and LDS women today. With new insights on practically every page, author Heather B. Moore explores the written and unwritten stories of the prominent women in the Book of Mormon — taking familiar material and providing vivid details about family dynamics, domestic practices, and other aspects of daily life. By applying historical and cultural contexts to the situations of women like Sariah, Abish, Eve, Mary, and the faithful mothers of the striplings warriors, you will peek beneath the surface of the scriptural accounts to better understand both the righteous women of the Book of Mormon — and the women who didn’t use their agency wisely.

While Book of Mormon stories are predominantly focused on the men of the time, Heather’s book shows just how important, if understated, the contributions of women were in this history. Heather takes the stories of these women straight from the scriptures and expands on them, giving us full and vibrant portraits.

Admittedly, a sizable part of the book is speculation, but as a High Priest I’m used to that. Unlike much of the speculation that goes on in Sunday morning meetings, Heather’s is extremely sound, based firmly in the extensive research she has done into the histories and cultures of ancient Israel and Mesoamerica. She knows her stuff, and the extrapolations she makes to fill in the blanks of these women and their lives feels natural and entirely believable.

The Women of the Book of Mormon will make a wonderful Mother’s Day gift for the women in your life. Heather will be doing two book signings this weekend. Go here to find out where and when.

A little over a month ago, I got an email from my good friend Tristi Pinkston, announcing that Valor Publishing Group had secured rights to four books written by the late W. Cleon Skousen, to be published posthumously. I was very happy for all of my friends at Valor – this is a tremendous win for their new company, and I believe these books will be a great fit for them.

The next day, I received another email from Tristi, asking if I could participate in the virtual book tour for the first of these volumes, The Cleansing of America. As busy as my schedule is, I still jumped at the chance to be a part of this tour.

(From the Valor website) Dr. W. Cleon Skousen spent the majority of his life researching the gospel, the U.S. Constitution, the founding of America and writing numerous books and articles on the topic, and he is one of the most well-known, respected defenders of America and the gospel the world has ever known. At the time of his passing in 2006, his work was not yet finished. His book The Cleansing of America, written in 1994 and given into the care and keeping of his sons, is now being brought forth for the first time ever.

Included in these pages are the events and stages the Lord has predicted, through his servants, the winding-up scenes of this world. It helps the reader understand: the nature of prophecy, the known chronology of prophetic events, and the importance of staying close to the Lord and his prophets during the difficult and challenging years prior to the Second Coming. We are fast approaching those prophetic events. Some are upon us even now.

If we are prepared and obedient, we need not fear these events, but rather embrace them for the blessings they portend.

My fascination with the “how” and “when” and “where” of the last days was very strong while I was on my mission, and it was then that I first grew to love Dr. Skousen’s work. In The Cleansing of America, Dr. Skousen focuses on the role America and her people will play in the events prior to the second coming. His discussion is well thought out and thoroughly documented by sources from ancient and modern scripture.

In addition to chronicling the events of the last days, Dr. Skousen gives great council on the importance personal worthiness, and making sure we as individuals are living the lives we are supposed to live.

He also gives a fascinating history of the Law of Consecration and the United Order, and explains how the two differ. I thought I understood these concepts already, but his masterful explanation showed me how little I really knew.

The Cleansing of America is being released on April 1, 2010, and is available for pre-order through bookstores or directly from Valor.

I was provided with a pre-publication soft copy of this work to review, and was not compensated in any other way.